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Robb_b
Joined: 30 Jul 2007
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Location: Stuttgart
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 Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 3:50 pm Post subject: Rock-Pop-Song
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Hi,
I wrote a new song using several instances of RealStrat and it went out pretty fine. This time I also wrote some lyrics and sang the vocals....since I´m not a great singer and have no practice this can be done better for sure, but anyway I think it´s a nice song I created, how do you think about it?
Here´s the link:
http://www.agentur-stuttgart.de/bevilacqua-music/wimpy.php[/url] |
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Ash06
Joined: 21 Jun 2006
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 5:24 pm Post subject:
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tom27
Joined: 16 Jul 2006
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 6:19 am Post subject: Re: Rock-Pop-Song
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Hey Robb,
nice song, really 
If I may recommend one thing, it would be to lower the volume of the vocals a bit - they are just a bit too outstanding.
Cheers
Tom |
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Robb_b
Joined: 30 Jul 2007
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 6:30 am Post subject:
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Hey Tom,
thanks for listening and the feedback. I think you´re right that the vocals are a bit too loud...I´ll adjust the volume...sometimes it´s hard to tell, when you made a brand new song and you listen to it time and time again to see if everything sounds well. Feedback is always appreciated
Cheers
Roberto |
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clueblast
Joined: 08 Feb 2006
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Location: germany
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 10:28 am Post subject:
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an instrumental version would be even better. 
not that i don´t like your voice, but i´d like to hear more of the RS-details which seem to be well done, btw.
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Chamelion
Joined: 21 Nov 2005
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Location: Sydney Australia
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:25 am Post subject:
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You mean like this?
http://music.dottunes.net/dynamic/realstratplayer.jsp?type=Name&search=always
At present the player is programmed to autoplay. The advantage of this that it starts playing almost immediately. The disadvantage is that the track repeats. It's easy to change that so you have to hit Play manually to hear it - like the Wimpy Player. I'll get Jeff to set it up and I'll show you.
I really like the new song, and I think your voice has both character and good intonation. The arrangement could stand a little more light and shade, but the guitar parts sound very authentic, well conceived, and well played. You should give yourself a pat on the back for a job well done.
Cheers,
Geoff
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Robb_b
Joined: 30 Jul 2007
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Location: Stuttgart
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 12:19 pm Post subject:
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Thanks Geoff for giving feedback.
What did you mean with "the arrangement could stand a little more light and shade"
Have to update my english vocabulary it seems 
Regarding the player everything cool, don´t let your son have too much work because of us. I like the player....if I knew before I would have bought your son´s instead of Wimpy |
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